Sample #1
This sample was done mid 7th grade. It'll make much more sense if you first read Antitech, my dystopia story. Find it at the previous link, or at the District 92078 project tab on this website. It is basically a close up of the middle of Antitech. To the left, you'll see a critiqued version of this sample.
Go to the link to read the final version. WARNING! THOSE WHO HAVE NOT READ THE ORIGINAL STORY, SPOILERS AHEAD! https://docs.google.com/a/hightechhigh.org/document/d/1mqzCkirtTtV7nZZXmFYhIdHoYgnPOa0nsY7SGO4vZiI/edit
Here is a reflection on the story. https://docs.google.com/a/hightechhigh.org/document/d/1Q2G5_nixOTrlQyMXf6qinBZDs3k5EyDJDS106hiojss/edit
Go to the link to read the final version. WARNING! THOSE WHO HAVE NOT READ THE ORIGINAL STORY, SPOILERS AHEAD! https://docs.google.com/a/hightechhigh.org/document/d/1mqzCkirtTtV7nZZXmFYhIdHoYgnPOa0nsY7SGO4vZiI/edit
Here is a reflection on the story. https://docs.google.com/a/hightechhigh.org/document/d/1Q2G5_nixOTrlQyMXf6qinBZDs3k5EyDJDS106hiojss/edit